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ZenkaiHozuki
Posts : 2 Join date : 2011-08-10 Location : kirigakure
| Subject: Zenkai "The Rouge"Hozuki Wed Aug 10, 2011 2:49 am | |
| Name:Zenkai Hozuki
Age:19 (Rp only)
Classification:Missing-nin
Affiliation:Kirigakure
Team:Seven Swordsmen Of The Hidden Mist
Partner:None
Rank:Jounin (But Missing Nin)
Summoning Contract:Shark's,Raven's
Chakra Nature:Wind,Water,Lighting
Wepon's:Shuriken{30}/Kunai's{30}/Bomb Kunai's {30}/Explosive tag's {20}/Smoke Bomb's{10}/Flash Bomb's {20}/Kubikiribōchō
Appearance:Zenkai is a handsome young shinobi standing at 5'8 he usually wears a white tank top with a brown strap going across his chest holding his Kubikiribocho on his back,Zen has black shinobi pant's with white wrapping around his right leg thigh with a kunai holder strapped over it.Zenkai has Yellow blond hair with his kirigakure forehead protector sewed on to a black cloth witch he ties on his forehead,he has Light blue color eyes with black shinobi sandals,he has brown wrapping around his hands and arm's up to his elbow.Zen also has piercings on his tongue he show's it when he licks his lick when he's about to kill showing his shark like teeth.on his forearm he has a dragon tattoo witch is shown when he unwraps his left arm.
Personality: was initially portrayed as aggressive, arrogant, cruel, cold and ambitious, willing to become sasuke's thug to gain enough funds to start a second coup d’état on the Mizukage, and kill anyone who stood in his path, including plotting to kill sasuke once gaining enough funds from him. He willingly uses his own men and others as pawns to fulfil his ambitions, as he raised his younger brother to be an efficient tool to be discarded when he had no use to exploit; although unlike future villains, he was blunt about the purpose that his recruits were needed for, lacking the manipulation of pretending to be kind to inspire loyalty.He is an observant adversary who is able to analyse his opponent's techniques after seeing it once, but becomes overconfident if he sees the technique as useless.He has also shown a sense of honour, as seen after his killing when he expressed disgust about the idea of working for anyone who would stoop down so low as to use the dead as their tools.
Bio: The Hozuki clan was killed in a great war against a different nation. zen's parents had gone with the war, thus making him an orphan. Within two years, Zen had found a group called the seven swordsmen of the mist, and an old man kindly took him in. Without a slight resemblance of a soul,zen has learned to forget the sadness of his tragic life after this his was forced to Steal food and survive off of that he later ed in rolled in the academy and became a genin of the Kirigakure at the age of ten.
During his training he found a summoning scroll with the contract of an raven he signed it and began to practice his jutsu every day he kept at hit until one day he Finlay collapsed and woke up several hours later he would look around scratching his head then got up and continue after three weeks zen Finlay completed the jutsu in his accomplishment he decided to go on a journey for a while he packed everything he needed to survive water,food,kunai's.
Threw out his journey he made many new friends and learned many new jutsu one day zen was walking against a abandon road as he sensed a weird presence he looked around he dropped his book bag and opened his mouth uttering the word "show Yourself'' ten ninja sprang out of the tree's zen got read as he reached with his right hand and gripped his katana Leaping in the air cutting the first two rouge straight threw thier ribs rai would smile as he landed and charged a another rouge zen would stop as they surrounded him zen would chuckle as he spread his body apart '' Chidori Stream"Lighting would begin to scatter every where killing the last eight rouge shinobi he walked towards his bag picking it up and continuing his travels As he walked he found a weird shaped kunai he picked it up and felt how it was oddly heavy for a kunai he placed it in his bag and continued as he walked zen ran into an abandon cabin it looks like its been their for a while as zen opened the door he saw 50 of those special kunai and a diary saying how to learn and master space time ninjutsu as he immediately began to train after five years he mastered it gaining the title "yellow shark of the mist".
When zen was leavening the village he was attacked by leaf shinobi and the anbu captain battled it out but at the end Zen won obtaining his left eye byakugan and kept it for later purposes during the battle zen unlocked his blood line kekkei genkai none as Hydration techniqe he carefully mastered it at the age of seven teen as he went back to the Kirigakure he saw a evil lair that was abandon with he discovered the edo tensi scroll to preform the ninjutsu he simply took it and continued his way home to discover the 8th mizukage was crowned after three months he became a member of the seven swords men of the mist.
After this Zen was a great sword's men but eventually became dull after learning his clan was murdered by order's of the mizukage Zen left the village becomeing a rouge of the mist and began to look around and meet a member of the akatsuki who was also member of seven sword'smen witch took him under his wing becoming even stronger witch he eventually helped him master lighting release.
Jutsu:
1.(Muon Satsujin Jutsu) - Silent Homicide Technique
Rank: D Type:Attack Range:Short-Mid Chakra Cost:10 Damage Points:20 Description: Muon Satsujin Jutsu, the ability to commit a silent homicide, is a technique to dispatch your foe with no warning. Your quick speed and skills will instantly kill them before they can provide a defense. Tactic:Best used with Hidden Mist jutsu
2.(Kuchiyose no Jutsu) - Summoning Technique
Rank: C Type:Supplementary Range:Short-Mid Chakra Cost:15 Damage Points:N/A Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. The ninja normally signs a blood contract with the animal species, which allows him to summon different size and skill levels of creature. Note:Summoning Shark,Turtle,Raven's
3. (Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidden Mist Jutsu Rank: D Type: Supplementary Range: Short/Mid Chakra Cost: 10 Damage Points: N/A Description: The user creates a thick, dense mist that covers the surrounding area.
4.(Suiton: Chakra Kenpa No Ame) - Water Style: Chakra Senseing Rain Rank: C Type: Supplementary Range: Short-Long Chakra cost: 15 Damage Points: N/A Description: A down pour of rain will fall and any thing with chakra that it touches the user can sense there location and instantly know there.
5.(Suiton: Suirou No Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Prison Rank: C Type: Supplementary Range: Short Chakra cost: 15 Damage Points: N/A Description: Traps opponent in a orb of water that the user must maintain contact with or the jutsu is broken.
6.(Suiton: Koukasuijin) - Water Style: Hard Water Spike Rank: A Type: Attack Range: Short Chakra cost: 30 Damage Points: 60 Description: The user generates a huge, highly condensed spike of water around their arm that drills opponents into the ground (No water source required).
7.Fuuton: Kaiten Shuriken (Wind Style: Rotating Shuriken) Type:Attack Rank: C Range:Short-Mid Chakra Cost:15 Damage Points:30 Description: The user will first focus on his Wind chakra and create spinning air gusts. When the air gusts are ready, he will throw up to 4 shurikes, which will engage with the gusts through the air as spinning disks. These disks are controlled by the user can be thrown individually towards the opponent.
8.Fuuton: Renkuudan (Wind Style: Drilling Wind Bullet) Type:Attack Rank: A Range:Short-Long Chakra Cost:30 Damage Points:60 Description: User will concentrate on his wind chakra and then send it into the sky. Originally Gaara's technique, different characters will need to perform handseals in order to imbue their chakra in the air. In conjuction with the wind primarly sent to the sky, a huge spiraling sphere of wind is created than is strong enough to do major damage to even a Summoning like Gamabunta.
9.(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder Rank: C Type: Offense Range: Short Chakra Cost: 15 Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu) Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.
10.(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning Rank: B Type: Offense Range: Mid/Long Chakra Cost: 20 Damage Points: 40 Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.
11.Chidori stream Rank:B range:close Chakra cost:10 Damage point's:40 Description:By releasing the Chidori in every direction, an electrical discharge flows from the user's entire body allowing him to affect multiple enemies. When using this attack on a great number of enemies at once, it can effectively double as an instant defence. The body of the person touched by the Chidori will misinterpret the Lightning nature as "electrical signals from the nerves," making its muscles contract. This causes the body to involuntarily go stiff, while at the same time receives damage. This attack can also be channelled through the ground to increase the range of the attack
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| | | Nue
Posts : 7 Join date : 2011-08-01 Location : Kumogakure
| Subject: Re: Zenkai "The Rouge"Hozuki Wed Aug 10, 2011 2:33 pm | |
| You used Chidori Stream in your history. It should have have been listed in your provided jutsu. Your grammer could could be worked on a great deal, and I don't see how you have Danzo's Sharingan. This takes place (yet again) 100 years after where the manga is currently. Danzo has been dead and for you to have obtained his eye makes no sense at all. Space and Time Ninjutsu, no. If you are going thinking about teleporting about, please stop. You are NOT the fastest Shinobi alive, to claim that is like me claiming to be the smartest Shinobi alive, yeah sure. I can approve this character to some extent, but there are so many flaws and I do not think he should bear title of a Swordsmen of the Hidden Mist. | |
| | | Touyasama
Posts : 38 Join date : 2011-07-11 Age : 28 Location : In Hanji's basement...it's dark down here
| Subject: Re: Zenkai "The Rouge"Hozuki Wed Aug 10, 2011 4:28 pm | |
| I agree with Nue, also, you make multiple characters Rai, it's kinda annoying really, I know this because you reused the legendary kunai to get the "fatest shinobi alive" title, pick a damn character and stay with it. It's getting extremely ridiculous. Plus, you are only allowed 8 to start out with, you have 10. So all in all, keep a damn character, and quit chaing things up, you have like 3 already. Rai, Izuma, and now this. | |
| | | ZenkaiHozuki
Posts : 2 Join date : 2011-08-10 Location : kirigakure
| Subject: Re: Zenkai "The Rouge"Hozuki Wed Aug 10, 2011 4:42 pm | |
| I've edited it and i deleted those okay and i have proof for the three added jutsu witch i learned | |
| | | Touyasama
Posts : 38 Join date : 2011-07-11 Age : 28 Location : In Hanji's basement...it's dark down here
| Subject: Re: Zenkai "The Rouge"Hozuki Thu Aug 11, 2011 5:57 pm | |
| I am also closing the seven swordsmen, I have yet to see anyone who could fill the spot, and has asked for it, therefore you may not have one of the blades, however, if you choose to keep it, I will hunt you down and take it from you personally ^__^(Either way, I AM disposing of rogues from my own village once the story begins), choose wisely. As for your jutsu, we don't use damage points I don't think, nor cost points. Basically, it's a fight to the death, and well, the points are kinda worthless in this matter. | |
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